The Official Writing Challenge
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Great descriptions. You had me saying, ewwwww, out loud. Your story had a flavor of "family togetherness, through toleration" running through it, which I found heart warming.
03/04/10
I enjoyed this. Though maybe weak on topic, it is well written and totally interesting.
A very interesting story. You had me shuddering in all the right places. You are not the only one to have used eew instead of eek. Perhaps they aren't that different after all.
I will say you made me want to steadfastly avoid anyone who chews and spits. And I thought chewing gum was gross! Great job.
03/05/10
I empahized with this writer all the way though the first half of this entry, with a ditto comment of "Yuck"! Well written, and a unique take on this weeks topic - making a genuine Bullseye! (*.*)!
Such a cute, vivid, funny and, of course, "yucky" story! :) Great job.