The Official Writing Challenge
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This was cute, entertaining AND funny. Nice chuckle to start my day.
03/04/10
An engaging comic tale, well-told!
This is hysterical. What a devoted husband the MC has. i will say, though I've always thought opossums were kind of cute in their own way.
03/07/10
Wow, I can't imagine EVER wanting to take out the trash again after that experience! Great storytelling going on with this piece. I can SO relate to your "eek!" moment, as I absolutely hate critters popping up where they're not supposed to be.
03/08/10
Cute story! You definitely got the "Eek" theme in!

Watch the use of past and present tense; there was a shift about half way through.

Good descriptions and I enjoyed the loving tone though out your telling.