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What a great take on a familiar Psalm. I do believe those words came from God himself. Thank you for sharing the gift he gave you with me.
I'd like to copy and save the "New 23rd Psalm". It would be a great morning prayer. I often use Ps 23 as a prayer "model." I especially related to this essay because I'm employed by the church. God really IS my boss. :) Good job.
A great message with a powerful last line ending. Thanks!
Very good.
I think you did a great job re-working the 23rd Psalm.

I was a little unsure in the second paragraph if your mc was truly frightened by their situation or just uncertain. Of course, I tend to be a "slow" reader at times ;-)

Very fitting message in today's times