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What a great take on a familiar Psalm. I do believe those words came from God himself. Thank you for sharing the gift he gave you with me.
03/01/10
I'd like to copy and save the "New 23rd Psalm". It would be a great morning prayer. I often use Ps 23 as a prayer "model." I especially related to this essay because I'm employed by the church. God really IS my boss. :) Good job.
A great message with a powerful last line ending. Thanks!
03/02/10
Very good.
03/02/10
I think you did a great job re-working the 23rd Psalm.

I was a little unsure in the second paragraph if your mc was truly frightened by their situation or just uncertain. Of course, I tend to be a "slow" reader at times ;-)

Very fitting message in today's times