The Official Writing Challenge
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02/26/10
This is lovely.
"Gazing at the flowers blooming
On stems in grassy seas,
Leaning on the Master’s grooming,
They wave in majesty." Is my favorite verse, but I love the way you used words to form beautiful pictures and settings throughout. Plus an excellent overall message.
I like the line quiet is a choice. A very touching poem
02/27/10
Basking under the noonday sun,
My face lifts to the sky;

Yes, so many times I have done this and felt God there.

I, too, loved the line 'quiet is a choice.'
I found this a very encouraging, quieting poem.
03/04/10
Beautiful! I especially like the third verse.