The Official Writing Challenge
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What a cute, fun poem. Totally relatable! I was concerned for the mother's heart though. You mentioned, she heard her daughter telling the auntie about her ordeal, but I think I needed closure (like, maybe the mother was moved to try the chair). :)
This was a cute poem that shows how a child can make the ordinary seen extraordinary. I enjoyed it
08/13/10
Too cute. I remember getting my hair washed like this, too. I love children's points of view:)