The Official Writing Challenge
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02/25/10
Achan thought he was so smart. You brought the Biblical event to life very well.
02/27/10
I enjoyed reading this. Your dialogue was well-written and believable. You created a scene I could visualize. Great job.
02/27/10
Well written and so true of our human failings. Heaven will be such a welcome change.
You made every detail so real. My heart was thudding when I learned he had taken the wealth against Joshua's and ultimately God's orders. If we only would listen...
You did a great job of bringing the story to life with vivid details. Well done.
03/16/10
Very well done dramatization of Achan's moment of sin. The ending came so abruptly that I almost sumbled over it. It leaves much to the imagination, which is part of the power of the story.