The Official Writing Challenge
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I felt the "shhh," as if they meant for her to be ashamed, until our heavenly father showed his unbridled love. Awesome title.
How wonderful that you realized you do have a Father that loves you unconditionally. My heart still hurts for that little girl. I want to reach across time and give her a hug.
03/02/10
This story, sadly to say, is like so many other stories of children growing up in broken homes in these modern times; but the last paragraph is what made your story stand out. Touching the heart to the point of tears, that paragraph turned a common, everyday, ho-hum story, (in my opinion) into a masterpiece! Thanks for sharing this with your FW readers.
03/02/10
Lovely title to go with a great story. Wonderful.
03/03/10
I disagree with one of the commenters here. There was nothing ho-hum about this story. If it is true, I'm glad you have written it down. Sometimes the writing it down is like a purging of the soul. Actually seeing it in on paper in your own words can be cathartic. Now rip it up and throw it away. Very well written.