The Official Writing Challenge
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Beautiful!
You described a perfect mother- daughter relationship. It was spectacular in every way.
02/28/10
Enjoy the flow of this, although I don't know many two year olds like the one depicted in this story. Most are still very clingy until at least four. Good writing though.
What a sweet poem and "Yea" it totally discribes my two year old daughter completely. Don't know why she's breaking away so soon, but still filled with lots of love.
03/03/10
This is so cute. Some kids are born breaking free. lol It is a sweet insight into both mother and daughter, and contains a lot of truth.