The Official Writing Challenge
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02/19/10
I was on the edge of my seat, reading this one. Nicely written.

Altho' I'm trying to figure out how the title applied (an anorak is a jacket, right?) & I don't quite understand what happened at the end. Maybe some clarification on what a D-SLR is?
02/19/10
Very atmospheric in your description and how you've unwrapped the story. The suspense is very well built-up with a reassuring escape. Well done.
02/20/10
Had to read this one through twice. Needs a lot of work, I agree about having the tenseness thru out though.
02/21/10
As evidenced by your American and Australian commentators,most people outside of the UK wouldn't be familiar with the expression of Anorak to describe a train spotter, plane spotter, etc. One of the challenges of writing for a worldwide audience!
Nevertheless a good story but plenty of tension.