The Official Writing Challenge
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02/20/10
I enjoyed reading of your day and was especially entertained by Lisa. There is a lot of fun (and I'm sure) a lot of truth in your clever poem! :)
02/20/10
Poem was very written in a very chaotic way, if that was what you were trying to achieve to reflect your day, you succeeded. Not what I like to read, but may be for some.
Your poem gave an accurate description of a day all mothers have had - some days truly are that chaotic.

A couple of lines didn't flow as smoothly as they possibly could have, but overall, very entertaining.

I need to go and have a nap now, you've exhausted me :-)