The Official Writing Challenge
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You had me going the whole time. I thought he was going to rob a bank, not propose. Good job.
Creative take on the topic, and you kept me guessing until the end. Good job!
02/23/10
Good use of foreshadowing in your story. What a great a-ha moment at the end! I enjoyed this!
02/23/10
Awww! That's such a great "Phew!" Loved the way you used the internal dialogue.
02/24/10
I was waiting for the mc to get up blow his lines on stage but liked the surprise turn. You did a good job capturing his inner turmoil.