The Official Writing Challenge
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02/22/10
Been on a few mud porches myself and have seen what you wrote; loved the kerchief/flower picture. Very eloquent writing ...fitting to the two sisters; I seemed to know them too!
02/25/10
Wow, Loren. What a great piece of writing. The first paragraph was gorgeous...lyrical, like so much of your work. I can appreciate the double nod to Mr. Lewis; the title was a nice touch;) Congratulations on the not-so-coveted bridesmaids spot. Well done.
I love the details in this beautiful character study--stayed in my mind long after I'd read it.