The Official Writing Challenge
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A really nice story poem with a reassuring, sweet message. I'm no judge of poetry but it felt good to read this one.
You touched me with your description of the reality most of us endure at some time in our lives. Too many times, I didn't go for the same reasons! I felt encouraged at your perseverance to go to church "anyway" and even more touched with how God met your needs. Amen!
02/25/10
Good job with this poem. Good cadence and message!