The Official Writing Challenge
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02/18/10
A really nice story poem with a reassuring, sweet message. I'm no judge of poetry but it felt good to read this one.
02/23/10
You touched me with your description of the reality most of us endure at some time in our lives. Too many times, I didn't go for the same reasons! I felt encouraged at your perseverance to go to church "anyway" and even more touched with how God met your needs. Amen!
02/25/10
Good job with this poem. Good cadence and message!