The Official Writing Challenge
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02/21/10
Oh wow! What fun, what rhyme! A favorite stanza, "Ah!, that teenage drama when emotions tend to spew. -- Romance buds (though some are duds), we woo, sometimes to rue. -- Spread those wings, try new things. That could kill me? Pooh! -- A great big world now opens wide and I’m so ready! Phew!" I enjoyed the appropriate "Phew!" at the end of each stanza! Your ending is beautiful. I'm longing for that rest!
What a great description of life.
02/24/10
Nicely done.
02/25/10
Hey Jackie... Congrats on receiving "highly commended" with this wonderful poem!!
I loved this and chuckled as I read it and thought about my one year old granddaughter. Great job. Congrats.