The Official Writing Challenge
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This story has a flavor of adventure that I enjoyed very much. The blessings received on the journey were delightful to read. Thanks for sharing.
I was in awe and admiration for taking such a journey, alone. It was nice to read your descriptions of a land I will probably not see in this lifetime. I kicked into your spiritual warfare of praising and song as I felt I was there with you.
Needs some work, but overall a good story.