The Official Writing Challenge
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02/18/10
Your title is perfect! I enjoyed this from the "stiletto march" to the "rondevous" tomorrow (after only being off a couple hours). I could see your MC going about her harried day!
Just reading this left me breathless! I like the ending with the phew.
02/22/10
good rythm. great word pictures. very nicely done!