The Official Writing Challenge
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02/20/10
Interesting, but has been told almost this way a thousand times, the stage play concept is a good idea, though. Keep writing, and allow the creative juices to flow!
02/22/10
you show some good narrative skills. you stuck your format well, too. but, i have to agree, this particular story has been told a lot. you demonstrate the creativity to explore lots of other possibilities, and I look forward to reading them in the future. keep up the good work.