The Official Writing Challenge
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02/11/10
I think you nailed Leave it to Beaver, ummm.. I mean Bunny, perfectly. Funny stuff and so mild. Wow, tv shows sure have changed.
02/15/10
Lol. I think you nailed the topic with your "aha" moment. Very, very creative and well written. Tee hee. Love it...
02/16/10
lol! Right on with "The Bunny" and all the characters...and Edith/Eddy, the one you love to hate ;-) You Masters can always pull it off superbly
02/16/10
This is really terrific! I had guessed the ending--but not because you threw too many clues, but because you nailed the decade and dialog so perfectly. Great writing.