The Official Writing Challenge
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LOL! Very cute!!
Loved it! That was so much fun to read and so relatable. I caught myself grinning half way through because I actually remember being that awkward and goofy about my looks. Initiation indeed. Ha!
haha, good one! I was your main character all over at that age
This was so much fun! I enjoyed being swept along with your MC's initiation into the world of womanhood, sisterhood, and cosmetics. Well done!
This was a lot of fun to read! I had my thick, dark eyebrows plucked exactly once... when I was in college, and attracting the opposite sex was all-important. After that, I decided any guy who didn't like my eyebrows wasn't worth having--good choice! Thanks for bringing back good... um... memories.:) Well done!
Super-duper fun fluffits! I was in the middle of this scene, not just reading. Great writing. :)
This was oh so scary. Cute and fun but scary. The things women do...
Yay, Sara, congrats on your placing!