The Official Writing Challenge
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02/11/10
Ohhhh... I hope this is to be continued!!

So descriptive, almost lyrical. Really a lovely read. I hope we hear a "Phew!" next week!
02/22/10
Karen, I love how you've set up this mystery. The sights, smells, and sounds, very foreign, yet you brought them to me. Your "cliff-hanger" ending was masterful. Will there be a part 3?