The Official Writing Challenge
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from title to finish, I loved this one! a story complete in itself. nice dialogue. I could see the mom fussing and fuming and poor Gordon again faced with his parents eccentricities. well done.
02/15/10
Cute story with the big Yuck factor! Some men!
02/15/10
EWW! ROFL! But EWW!
I can cope well with many disgusting things, but toenails make me shudder! Your pacing and dialogue were great, but eww!
{{{shudder}}}
02/16/10
Yes, I think you should have saved this for the inevitable "Ew!" week which I'm afraid is on the horizon. Fun story, though I don't think "Footelizer" will ever revolutionize the gardening industry. Good job!
02/16/10
Genius!
You wrote an entire story on... toenails and managed to bring out laughter and disgust for your readers!
Amazing!
02/18/10
This was so male it ought to carry a health warning. Hats off for creativity