The Official Writing Challenge
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02/14/10
What a fascinating comparison, but it's perfect. I've been reading Daniel a lot lately! The "T’ephylon" was over-the-top funny! :) Darius fell into the "lion's-pride" trap. What a surprise the governor's received (comparable to Haman's in Esther). This is a perfectly written and titled. Your thought-provoking message is superb.
I really like the fast-forward/rewind technique you used with this story. Politicians today would do themselves, and our country, a huge favor by following Daniel's example. Ohhh...that we had more Daniels in office! Love the title of your story. Good job.
02/18/10
Intriguing introduction. I'm afraid you lost me a bit once you shifted to Daniuel. Sorry.