The Official Writing Challenge
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02/15/10
You did a good job of hooking the reader with your beginning. I enjoyed your humor. :)
02/17/10
Oh my, Dr. Michaels had her hands full with this gal. Her question, "What will you remember...?" didn't quite get the response she was looking for! Cute humor in this entry. Some of the dialogue didn't seem realistic to me (a bit cliche), but not overly so. What I want to know is, why didn't Deborah clean up her own mess?! ;) Creative use of the topic, and nice writing.