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02/15/10
Phew! I was relieved.. thought it would turn out differently. :) You had my full attention as your story unfolded. I like your use of detail!
I enjoyed this. I was on the edge of my seat.
Courtships can be the darndest things, can't they? The misunderstandings, guessing games, insecurities - you captured it all in this nicely developed story. Needs a bit of fine tuning with punctuation; otherwise, a very enjoyable read! Well done.
02/18/10
Hey Sharon, congrats on placing 10th in the Level 3 with this entry! There are so many talented writers here, so great job! If you haven't already, be sure to check out the Highest Rankings on the boards:

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