The Official Writing Challenge
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02/11/10
Poetic justice! The Lord gives grace to the humble but abases the proud. So much for "dumb blonde," Jeremy. ;)
02/14/10
Cute justice; well traced with a good build-up to a zinger of a punchline!
Great story, loved the ending.
Oh, this was such fun to read! At least as a writer you can make things turn out right, huh? Superior story telling skills!
ahhh, if only this happened more often in life, huh? You kept me reading right through the whole piece, waiting for the twist I didn't see coming!
02/17/10
Intriguing from beginning to end!
02/18/10
You set the tone brilliantly in your ever so funny introduction.
02/18/10
Ha. I have to laugh. I love the poetic justice here. It serves him right in more ways than one and I love the fact that she wasn't dumb in the very least. Nice name too! ^_^ A fun read.
02/18/10
very well written. Kept my attention the whole way. I loved the ending. Thanks by the way for your kind words on my "phew!" entry.