The Official Writing Challenge
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02/11/10
Poetic justice! The Lord gives grace to the humble but abases the proud. So much for "dumb blonde," Jeremy. ;)
02/14/10
Cute justice; well traced with a good build-up to a zinger of a punchline!
Great story, loved the ending.
Oh, this was such fun to read! At least as a writer you can make things turn out right, huh? Superior story telling skills!
02/16/10
ahhh, if only this happened more often in life, huh? You kept me reading right through the whole piece, waiting for the twist I didn't see coming!
02/17/10
Intriguing from beginning to end!
02/18/10
You set the tone brilliantly in your ever so funny introduction.
02/18/10
Ha. I have to laugh. I love the poetic justice here. It serves him right in more ways than one and I love the fact that she wasn't dumb in the very least. Nice name too! ^_^ A fun read.
02/18/10
very well written. Kept my attention the whole way. I loved the ending. Thanks by the way for your kind words on my "phew!" entry.