The Official Writing Challenge
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02/15/10
Love this story and its portrayal of an enduring friendship and loyalty, the dialogue adds an authentic touch and was done well.
Loved the setting for this one, great last paragraph!
02/16/10
I enjoyed this story of a friendship and partnership. One hundred thousand to his son if he stays out of the country forever... now that's a creative solution! Good job.
Yay, Virgil, congrats on placing 9th in Level 3!
02/20/10
Your beginning with "dark suited round mound of a man" made me smile and I was absorbed in this engaging story throughout. I could hear the speaker's accent with each conversation. Congrats on your level placing!