The Official Writing Challenge
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02/15/10
Love this story and its portrayal of an enduring friendship and loyalty, the dialogue adds an authentic touch and was done well.
02/15/10
Loved the setting for this one, great last paragraph!
02/16/10
I enjoyed this story of a friendship and partnership. One hundred thousand to his son if he stays out of the country forever... now that's a creative solution! Good job.
02/18/10
Yay, Virgil, congrats on placing 9th in Level 3!
02/20/10
Your beginning with "dark suited round mound of a man" made me smile and I was absorbed in this engaging story throughout. I could hear the speaker's accent with each conversation. Congrats on your level placing!