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02/14/10
Good mystery. Enjoyed reading it! Thanks for sharing.
02/16/10
Very creative angle for "Ohhh..."

It seemed like I came right into the story!
Nice pacing, engaging...you definitely have a knack for mystery stories. I hope you plan on developing this into a novel. I'd read it! (And now I have to try to go to sleep, but will lie awake wondering about the significance of the bracelet, the connection between Nan and the murdered man, etc. Thanks a lot!) ;)
02/18/10
Ohhh what on earth is happening to Nan! Someone must be setting her up --hurry up and get her out of trouble.