The Official Writing Challenge
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02/11/10
Well, I'd say you picked the right title:) I was ready to have him find out he threw the wrong ring in the river:( Oh well. lol.
02/11/10
What a fun romance. I'm guessing it lasted years and years! I enjoyed this Valentine's special "ohhh" story. I was ready to throw him in with the ring. Great job on the topic.
02/13/10
Phew! Would have worked great on the this challenge. Great writing for my learning curve. Thanks.
02/15/10
I'm glad this little romantic episode ended positively. My husband liked to joke and play pranks, but when he found out that I was on the serious side, he toned it down, fearing he would lose me in the end. I don't think I would have liked to have the kind of pranks this lover pulled. But all in all, I enjoyed the story...Good writing...Helen
02/15/10
I loved the groom getting his! It was easy to follow,lighthearted and great fun!
02/15/10
Ahh, very fitting title! You illustrated well how some pranksters cross the line from funny to mean. Jim was lucky she was more forgiving that I would be, lol. Entertaining story. Nicely done!
02/16/10
If Margaret can go through with it after that, I'd say their marriage has a good chance of success. And those groomsmen? How many pranks have those guys endured through the years, do you think? Payback!! Fun story, good job.