The Official Writing Challenge
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02/14/10
I really enjoyed this SF story. You have to extend it. I want to read more.
Good characters too, but I wouldn't want to meet Sudenjah in a dark alley. Well done!
02/14/10
I'm not a fan of Sci/Fi but found this interesting and wanted more. It felt like a tiny bite of a larger work. Vivid description. Don't forget to use question marks when there's a question.