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02/13/10
Wow . . . this is beautifully written. Very descriptive. Great job.
02/14/10
At first I thought it was a slap on the wrist to holier than thou Christians who forget that they too are just sinners saved by grace. ...sharp way of getting inside of Paul's mind. I didn't get it until the end.
02/16/10
Very clever and well written. I also didn't see it was Paul till you mentioned Damascus, then I re-read it and it all fit. A very clever technique to make us examine our own hearts first!
Personally I think it would have been more powerful without the 'Oh, It's you' at the end.
02/18/10
Hey Benjamin, congrats on placing 13th in the Level 3 with this entry! There are so many talented writers here, so great job! If you haven't already, be sure to check out the Highest Rankings on the boards:

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