The Official Writing Challenge
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What a delightful read. This is a keeper to be read when days have lost their sparkle. Great writing.
02/11/10
I am clapping my hands in delight over this one! Very cute.

What a delightful picture book this could be for children. i can see the images clearly. The kids would love this!
02/11/10
I agree, delight read for a children's book! Loved it!
02/12/10
Clever! I know how difficult it is to tell a story in poem. Great descriptions. Enjoyed this very much.
02/13/10
I agree too. Lots of fun to read and a great ending.
very well written. It took talent to write a story like this with such rhythemic poetry.
02/14/10
Every stanza filled with entertaining merriment. Such a fun read. This would definitely make a marvelous picture book; imagine the illustrations!
02/15/10

Two thumbs up! Great story-telling!
02/15/10
This NEEDS to be published with beautiful illustrations!
02/17/10
Yes, yes, yes! So very well done! Great imagery, great dialog, the characters very well drawn, and the point clearly made, but with sweet humor. Thanks for sharing this delight.
02/18/10
This was a lot of fun. And unlike some of the other poetry I've read this week, you maintained your pace right to the end. Well done.