The Official Writing Challenge
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What a delightful read. This is a keeper to be read when days have lost their sparkle. Great writing.
I am clapping my hands in delight over this one! Very cute.

What a delightful picture book this could be for children. i can see the images clearly. The kids would love this!
I agree, delight read for a children's book! Loved it!
Clever! I know how difficult it is to tell a story in poem. Great descriptions. Enjoyed this very much.
I agree too. Lots of fun to read and a great ending.
very well written. It took talent to write a story like this with such rhythemic poetry.
Every stanza filled with entertaining merriment. Such a fun read. This would definitely make a marvelous picture book; imagine the illustrations!

Two thumbs up! Great story-telling!
This NEEDS to be published with beautiful illustrations!
Yes, yes, yes! So very well done! Great imagery, great dialog, the characters very well drawn, and the point clearly made, but with sweet humor. Thanks for sharing this delight.
This was a lot of fun. And unlike some of the other poetry I've read this week, you maintained your pace right to the end. Well done.