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02/14/10
Honest description of sibling rivalry at its finest! Great job showing the progression as you all got older. I loved the conversational relaxed tone of this piece, as well as touches of humor (brother eating your homework, chocolate pill bug...had to snicker at that one). Good job!
02/17/10
Very authentic story. I have siblings and can relate! Good job.
I so enjoyed the subtle humor. I could really relate to your topic being tormented by my brother as a child, although I'm sure I never did anything to upset him (teehee) Your article was so real, I enjoyed a great deal.