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02/05/10
Good ending.Nice story.
Another good dog story. ...an unexpected twist.

Just take another look at your spelling and the way some of the sentences were structured to see how you can improve it.
02/11/10
Interesting take on the subject. It is a well proven fact that animals can detect an "aura" about a sick person, and many a person about to have a seizure has been forewarned by a pet. Good story!
I've heard stories about this type of thing before. I'm glad she got the job and her little angel! Nice work with the topic.