The Official Writing Challenge
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Interesting use of story telling, although that is a very long postcard. Thanks for posting.
A cute idea...In your description of the "white and big pillow-like clouds," it might sound better to say "big and white." I believe, grammatically, adjectives should be size first, then color. The introductory paragraph could have been shorter and gotten to the point more quickly. A unique and creative idea!
I like this piece very much. I think it would be even more effective if it just began "Dear Robin..." without the introductory paragraph. Delightful descriptions!