The Official Writing Challenge
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02/04/10
Ahhh, we've all been there and done that with our childhood friendships - the fighting and reconciliations abound! Great storytelling going on here. And I do remember "pong" - such fun! Good job.
Hindsight with it's regrets are powerful lessons and what a great job you did conveying that to the reader.

I was truly able to connect with how you felt in looking back, which rekindled some of my own regrets.
02/12/10
Great story-telling here, and yes, we all have our regrets covered by the Master. Congratulations on placing in your level. Great job!

By the way, thank you for being the very FIRST to comment on my first challenge entry. It meant a lot to me.