The Official Writing Challenge
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02/08/10
I enjoyed your story, at times smiling at the neighbor's rants. :) Your slight spelling change (bear) in the Bible verse was perfect for your story. Creative work on this! :)
02/11/10
I, too have had my "Mama Bear" moments... I understand your MC perfectly. Really good story... with a really good lesson.