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02/08/10
Ouch. You hit a little too close to home:)
You did an awesome job allowing the reader to feel your passion of intolerable and at times, unbearable sentiments.

Is this fiction or are you writing from...living it?
If living it, you left me asking if your wife is getting any help for depression?
I can feel the moment by moment struggle. I hope the MC will be able to hear from the Lord that only HE can fix the soulmate's illness--which sounds like a severe depression rather than laziness----while the MC continues to seek His face for wisdom and strength.
02/11/10
I hope this is fictional, as it may be accurate but not too uplifting. If it's factual please remember that behind every successful man there is an astounded mother-in-law!