The Official Writing Challenge
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02/06/10
You have a nice even flow in your writing, I enjoyed it very much
02/07/10
Boy I hope this wasn't a true account. If so, not exactly an example of Christians behavior(mornings are no excuse)personally any morning is a good morning (and yes I have aches and pains in the mornings too). Overall writing was good.


02/07/10
Cute story,aren't we blessed when our family knows we get grumpy and loves us anyway.
02/09/10
True or not, Christians are human too. Well written and gave me a big chuckle at the end.
02/09/10
This is one of my favourites this week. I can relate to the aches and pains and missed meds AND the prayers that the hot shower eases the pain. Your story was smooth flowing, and had a great conversational style. I love the Post-It notes being stuck on everything. Well done.
02/10/10
I understand...I have fibro too.
02/10/10
I appreciated the honesty of this piece (we've all been there!), as well as the understanding and grace demonstrated by the family in the end. Great job!