The Official Writing Challenge
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That is marvellous!!! Very clever.Lots of tension, lots of fun. I think it is going to do well.
Not bad and you definitely got the grrr! in.
Great twist, a pesky brother was the last thing I expected as a monster.
A perfect title. I admire poets, and you're really good.
I so enjoyed reading this poem. Your rythm has a fun, light feel and yet your word choice still creates tension - a great combination! Congrats on an excellent submission.
very good poetry rythem that kept the story moving with ease.
Perfect in so many ways. I love reading poetry, but so often it isn't all that interesting. This is such a well-told story in poetic splendor.
Hope to see it as a winner.

A fun poem with a great ending! Good job.
Simply captivating in its simplicity, Well, well done. Bravo!
The flow was great, making it the sort of poem you can read aloud with ease. I could see the trees and feel her panic as she runs. Something tells me her brother is indeed going to be very sorry.
Well done, I love this.
Very visual and scary! Loved the twist at the end.
What a fun poem! Terrific use of "grrr". I had a similar experience with my brother while in my teens, and have never let him forget it!
Congratulations on your 1st Place win in Advanced and 3rd in Editor's Choice!! Well-deserved!! Yay!
Wow . . . my, what ride . . . my childhood fears, front and centre again, . . . and then that super sweet twist, at the end . . . grrrr . . . I wish for more!

Congratulations, Jackie, on your first place win; thank you for such an enjoyable read.

No question that this one belongs at top! Congrats!

Congrats on your first place win!
Congratulations on your EC!! This is great fun to read!
Impressive and certainly deserving of your placement!

Have you checked out the Challenge Forums?
This poem has all the right elements to keep the reader reading with interest. Congratulations on both wins/placements. Loved the surprise ending.
Fun poem! Congratulations on your EC!
Very nicely done. I can easily tell how this poem did so well in both level and editor's choice. Congrats.
Thyanks by te way for your kind words about my "Phew!" entry.