The Official Writing Challenge
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01/17/05
True words and your passion comes through.
01/17/05
Quite a few spelling and punctuation mistakes but very passionate.
01/18/05
I feel your passion,your message is very important. However, you can communicate and express it more with a simpler style of writing. That way,rather than talking the message,you'll be shouting it and we'll hear you loud and clear.
Thanks for blessing me... Keep winning and shining for Jesus.
01/18/05
Your passion comes across well. I think that you made a lot of valid points, however, you made the reader work hard to find them. You need to organise your thoughts more carefully. Use of short, clear sentences would help.
The topic is to importantant to not be presented in a more readable form. All those Elipses... VERY difficult read.
God bless you.
01/23/05
good points and an interesting layout in the presentation