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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 – Advanced)
Topic: First (as in original) (01/10/05)

TITLE: Abortion .. Is Not The First Time Distruction Has ..Come to Gods Children
By Bonnie Johnson
01/12/05


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Abortion , Was Not The First Deaths To Effect Gods Children


Abortion, was not the first deaths to effect Gods Children........But then again if someone would like to argue the fact.....It would probably be over typing... and edicate....social ills.....It is easier to take that way...........Avoiding the truth ...That is what it is about....Avoiding the first deaths........False Gods, False Profits, and most of all False Teachings......We argue over everything.......or set and watch for our Brothers and Sisters to stumble.....Thinking an apologie is enough to stop the spread of a childs death......It will not stop it, just as a flood will not stop the deaths........Tomarrow they will be right back at this behavior.....It is the most dreaded, thing to happen to a child.....but no one will change it.......Its popular, to kill a child...Yes I said popular..........Just like the God Bail.....People want to change things....They want control of everything....Babies are Just one thing , that gets in their way.... unfortunatly for that little life.........................Jesus Christ is comming back...soon and I hope when he leaves this world he takes those babies with him.....Sence some of us do not want them...Then they should be allowed to spend the Marriage Supper with us for a thousand years........Why should they have to be aborted, frozen,harvested, analised, and pawed over for the rest of eternity.........Christian Families believe that their Children are going in the rapture....They pray for this.......All of their children...They want their First Born to go in the Rapture, as well as their other Children.....They are Families....of The King of Kings....Jesus Christ......I watched the floods the other day wash away, false gods......I remember seeing them float away in the water in that disaster.........Now this morning......They are trying to justify why....The Children died... and all those who, were caught up in this situation....When The Bible explaines it.....Why did we not read it.....Earthquakes.Floods, Distruction.....To each one caught up in this disaster, my heart goes out to....Yes we need to help them....In anyway that we can......prayer, money, food, water......Abortion has reached there as well as all over the Uninted States......How many children have to die.... before we all wake up and return to the .....The FIRST SON OF GOD..... AND THE ONLY TRUE GOD....WHAT MAKES THE DIFFERENCE IF WE DESTROY OUR CHILDREN BY ABORTION..... OR IF THEY ARE DESTROYED BY NATURE.........I AM SURE MOST WILL SAY... THEY WERE INOCENT....WELL ABORTIONS FIRST TARGET IS THE INOCENT......ABORTION DOES NOT DESTROY THE SINNERS........IT IS THE INOCENT.... THE FIRST DIFFERENCE IS THE CONTROL...... WHO HAS THE FIRST CONTROL.... WHO WILL TAKE THE FIRST SWIPE AT A CHILD......... NATURE OR MAN... AND HIS SIN......One of the things God hates is the shedding of inocent blood.......But will that be the first thing they listen to... or will it be the last thing they listen to when all the crying is stopped from the lungs of a dieing child....Abortion the origional solution.....False Gods were the first.....Stones, heated and the children placed in their arms.as a sacrifice......Hasnt this world sacrifieced enough....God sent his only Son as the Sacrifice.... Not a heated rock........The killing must stop of the unborn....They are not the answer.... Jesus Christ is the answer......He has control not man.


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darlene hight01/17/05
True words and your passion comes through.
Sally Hanan01/17/05
Quite a few spelling and punctuation mistakes but very passionate.
Tesiri Moweta01/18/05
I feel your passion,your message is very important. However, you can communicate and express it more with a simpler style of writing. That way,rather than talking the message,you'll be shouting it and we'll hear you loud and clear.
Thanks for blessing me... Keep winning and shining for Jesus.
Melanie Kerr 01/18/05
Your passion comes across well. I think that you made a lot of valid points, however, you made the reader work hard to find them. You need to organise your thoughts more carefully. Use of short, clear sentences would help.
Annette Agnello01/20/05
The topic is to importantant to not be presented in a more readable form. All those Elipses... VERY difficult read.
Deborah Anderson01/22/05
God bless you.
L.M. Lee01/23/05
good points and an interesting layout in the presentation