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01/28/10
As I read this I had all the victims of Haiti's earthquake on my mind--and the miracles of those that were found alive after days of being buried in the rubble.
Intense and well-written. I was there with the victim and realized that these emotions were no doubt felt by many Haitians.
You had me from the first word. If I am every in a situation like that, I will keep this story in mind, and keep talking to the Lord. Well Done!
02/01/10
Creative in more ways than one. This is perfect for the topic and I like the "game" your MC uses to stay awake. Nice work on this homage to disaster victims!!