The Official Writing Challenge
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01/28/10
This tale put a smile on my face--maybe because I know people like this. It fit the topic perfectly as your words seemed to flow so easily. Bet this was fun to write too.
01/28/10
This started my day on a bright note - really funny and skilfully written.
Terrific! I tried to write one with this idea in mind and just couldn't get the dialog to work.

You did a wonderful job. So much fun!
Super dialogue and fantastic humor. This one put a smile on my face. Well done!
02/01/10
What an enjoyable, hilarious couple, completely suited for each other. :) I had to smile at the boy preferring a dog to a baby sister. :)
Entertaining story. Great dialogue and flow. Loved it!
What a delightful old couple. A love like that has to last.
02/02/10
What a delightful tale to read! I loved every word. Exceptional.
02/02/10
Truly delightful, with every comma in its proper place too - LOL!

Reminds me when I asked our daughters while pregnant if they would rather have a sister or brother: "We'd rather have a puppy!"
Wonderful story! I had fun wondering where it would ramble to next.
This is terrific. It puts me in mind of one of my favorite comic strips named "Pickles". Mostly about the exact characters you have so masterfully woven into this story.
02/03/10
Oh my, this was priceless. I loved the line, It was both wondrous and frightening to me that I was able to follow their bewildering conversation. Ditto, lol.
Absolutely fantastic, hysterical writing. Loved it.
Still smiling over what is written here and happy dancing, too, on your well-deserved EC placement.
02/04/10
Congratulations on your EC. This is so, so funny. Very talented writing to string that all together.
02/10/10
Very cute story. Perfect ending.