The Official Writing Challenge
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01/28/10
Try as I might, I cannot get a Huh!, out of this, a "Duh? What was I thinking?", possibly but not a huh? Anyway, well written except for the spacing.
01/30/10
Actually, I liked the punch of the Huh right where you put it in the story. Thank you for sharing so honestly and open about your past. God's grace and mercy are new every morning and as far reaching as we need them to be.
01/31/10
I think that this whole Huh? business is all a bit vague as different people interpret the expression in different way.
I didn't see the Huh? either but I thought it was refreshing to read of the unplanned pregnancy of a mature woman. Such stories are normally told of teenagers. And, yes, it was double stupid. But then we wouldn't be human if we didn't make mistakes.
I liked it. I saw the huh right away. The whole thing was a double, huh. Good job covering a beautiful story of trial, grace, and mercy and the beauty of picking up the pieces of a shattered life. Good job.