The Official Writing Challenge
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01/28/10
You did a fine job setting up this skit-- easy to see the setting and the mannerisms of your characters.

Fun little play on words for your closing. :)
I admit, you got me on the "shelf" business-I didn't catch on until you clarified the term. She must be using association to improve her memory. :)

Nice little skit with good scene-setting lines.