The Official Writing Challenge
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01/28/10
Perfect in meter and rhyme! ...and what a message you finish with!
Short and to the point. Good rhyme and rhythm wrapped in a great reminder that our Father is always listening; even when others are not. Well done.
01/30/10
Great job with the flow of the poem and the message it sends. I really liked the power-punch of the last two lines.
02/01/10
What a beautiful poem - well written with a great message. I loved your ending too.
02/04/10
I give this an A++++, maybe because I have had the same thoughts. Good job Lisa!!!