The Official Writing Challenge
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01/28/10
Ha! I'm with Ben -- I probably never would have figured it out either. Very clever!
01/28/10
Clever! I really like Sukie, what an amazingly complex and interesting character! I really enjoyed the story once I understood where you were going. What a great story! Kudos!
01/29/10
I agree, you did a great job developing strong characters in this story. The plot and flow of the story were well done.
Your story is beautiful on many levels.
Beautiful story. You did a wonderful job bringing the characters to life.
Excellent characterization in this lovely story...very touching.
02/01/10
I like this! You took me to unexpected places... and if I knew the melody to that song, I'm sure I'd be singing it too! :) Very good!
02/01/10
This is a lovely story. I'm intrigued by Sukie, who really does have a remarkable talent! Well done.
Very clever. A sweet story. I enjoyed the "flour" songs. :)