The Official Writing Challenge
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Oops...well done.
I liked this, I really did. I love dark stories. But I am thinking that you had to cut it down to make the word count because I'm alittle confused. I'm assuming that Jon killed her, but why did he come to Tonya's house? And why did the castle look familiar? The story is great and I'm very intrigued. Please e-mail me when the challange is done because I must know!
I agree eith J.C. This is a longer mystery that needs to be told.
I'm confused, too. How did Tanya / Tonya know what was in Jon's suitcase? And did she go away with him? Was the line "I won't be back" part of the message on the postcard? Lots of unanswered questions here...
A mystery that leaves you hanging.....good job!