The Official Writing Challenge
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01/28/10
Cute story.
01/28/10
Heehee...what a moment. I hate word differences like that...because I do it all too often! Great job with a realistic relation point. ^_^ Fun story!
Love the story! As a reader, I would have liked a more specific setting--you mentioned a college town, then were showing the sights of horse country. I was curious where you lived! :) Sounds like something I would have done with the key!
01/29/10
Fun story! I liked the humor.
01/31/10
Made me chuckle...thanks for the story. :)
01/31/10
It's a pleasing anecdote but it REALLY needs some fleshing out. So make the most of your word count and get those creative juices flowing.
This was a cute story. It was a little short, but it had a good point. And, we could probably all relate to it. Been there, done that.
I enjoyed your story and loved the ending. So many of my own memories of teaching while hubby finished college came to mind.
Cute in a fun and engaging way. Boy, does this bring back some memories - even a few that are more recent than others.
Cute, well written story. Sounds like a lot of people I know, including me.
Love the descriptions of the first home, and I could relate to the "Huh?" moment. Very enjoyable.
02/03/10
This really does bring back memories! I enjoyed reading this--thanks.