The Official Writing Challenge
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I might have added an: "It is done as You ask Lord" verse and then a "Now let's talk about you other problems line."
Still I liked this one. It's easy to see through the eyes of this person. Problem is, when the Lord speaks to "me" He wispers.
Beautifully written, not so easily done!
I really love this poem. We've all been here, I believe, wanting to hang on when the Lord says "Let go". Oh, the struggles we endure! Nice job!
Not only do I like the message in this poem, the meter and rhyme are remarkable.
thought provoking, and a well-written poem. I like how well it rhymed.
Lovely, a powerful elegantly written!Blessed me!Thanks....
Very good and congradulations on your 2nd place win!
I can understand why this ranks so highly among all the entries - beautifully written with an equally beautiful message.