The Official Writing Challenge
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01/28/10
A lyrical take on a very important theme, but your "Huh" seem smore dismissive than the questioning tone that I'd read in the topic. (Mind you I may be wrong, as I've been wrong before: once back in 1998 and another time in 1992 when I thought I was wrong but I was mistaken!)
I think I got it right-each huh is used with a different meaning; question, disbelief, amazement. Kudos to you.

Btw, good rhyming poetry too.
01/30/10
I like this poem very much. I like the 4th stanza, especially where you say you never think of turning back. Good job.
Good poetry--good theology--good testimony.
01/31/10
After I read Patricia's comments, I went back and read the poem again. Yep, it's there. Very creative. I enjoyed the Truth of the message as well.